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Saturday, 9 January 2010

Ode:To The earth - attempt



Beautiful earth, I question why you flair up with rage creating the greatest hurricane.
Why you flash with temper to create such beautiful lightening.
When you feel happy you smile down on us, blinding us by your bright teeth.
When you love us you shine for us, when you hate us you try to wash away our sin.
You never deny us the right to beauty, you never pretend to ignore our prayers.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Not bad for an attempt. lol

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Bernadine said...

Hi Popped in from Gavin's blog.

This was very nice. Short but nicely said.

I see you don't get lots of comments. Wonder why? Just don't give up. Just keep writing. Gavin and I will support you.

Enjoy your day.

I have nothing to declare but my genius said...

Hi, I like the line "you never deny us the right to beauty" - a gem, wish I'd thought of it.